Lady Umia Yulon V2 Redesign Part 7

I was going to write some micro fiction tonight but decided to do some more work on Umia instead.  The micro fiction can wait until I’ve finished this piece I think.

Sorted her hands out a bit and made some more general refinements.

I still want to put a pattern on her dress though.

UmiaYulon2E

My ADC-1 Comic Book Script V4 – Dissected At ComixTribe

I resubmitted the 4th iteration of my comic book script to the guys at ComixTribe and as expected, it came back with some areas for improvement.

I highly recommend this free service as personally I am learning loads from following the weekly critiques.

Time for me to digest and improve.

You can read the article on ComixTribe here.

And follow the discussion on the Digital Webbing Forum here.

Lady Umia Yulon V2 Redesign Part 1

I’m redesigning Lady Umia from my digital comic project as she was a bit too “action girl” and not enough “Lady”.

To get my brain in gear I’m doing some sketches.

A possible dress:

OrientalDressSketch1

A potential face and hair style:

UmiaYulonFaceSketch2A

Sylen Benevolen V3 B

Here’s Sylen Benevolen V3 after a couple of hours of digital painting.

His skin tone is bit more grey than purple this time – I like it better.

Also I’ve tried to give his trousers a more Victorian military quality.

SylenBenevolen3_B_Medium