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Captain Mothstorm Script Page 1

August 14, 2016

Comics, Writing

OK so this script has been through TPG twice and I have just gotten round to re-working page 1 after the last round of critiques. My main concern is the dialogue now. The setting is on another world so I originally tried medieval type speech but I think I over did it so I have toned that down. I have…

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My ADC-1 Comic Book Script V4 – Dissected At ComixTribe

March 26, 2016

Comics

I resubmitted the 4th iteration of my comic book script to the guys at ComixTribe and as expected, it came back with some areas for improvement. I highly recommend this free service as personally I am learning loads from following the weekly critiques. Time for me to digest and improve. You can read the article on ComixTribe here. And follow…

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Project ADC-1 Comic Book Script V4

February 29, 2016

Comics

This is version 4 of my Project ADC-1 comic book script.  I’ve added a bit more dialogue at the beginning in an attempt to reveal more of the storyline early on. I’ve also tinkered about with the moths.  They are no longer flame proof, but they can release a thick smoke-like dust.

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Project ADC-1 Comic Book Script V3

November 17, 2015

Comics

This is version 3 of the comic book script for my digital comic project.  I’ve taken out the bit about rescuing the hedgehogs and also added some telepathic dialogue between Benevolen and his moths.

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Project ADC-1 Comic Book Script V2

September 21, 2015

Comics, Writing

I’m satisfied enough with the high level plot now so I have translated it into a comic book script. Hopefully this time around I’ve avoided putting in any “moving panels” (comic book panels should be static snapshots in time). Page 1 Panel 1: It is dusk.  The planetary rings are visible in the purple cloud-streaked sky.  Captain Sylen Benevolen is…

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Project ADC-1 Comicbook Script

August 13, 2015

Comics

The Comicbook Script for Project ADC-1 is also now up in the Project Deliverables section.  This is my first attempt at a comicbook script.  I did do a bit of research on how to do this properly but I have also posted this on Digital Webbing Forums to see if I get any critique that will steer me along the right track.

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